Activity 10 : the farewell


>How many posts did you write?


>How many comments did you receive from classmates, teachers or overseas students?


> How many were school based, your own interests or set by the challenge?


>Which post received the most comments? Why do you think that happened?

4 it was the dwarfs I don’t know why.

>Which post did you enjoy writing the most and why?

my was the favourite places.

>Did you change blog themes at all and why?

I don’t know.

>How many widgets do you have? Do you think this is too many or not enough?

I did 3 and I think that is good.

>How many overseas students do you have on your blogroll?


>Which web tools did you use to show creativity on your blog?

I don’t know




Help People with cancer worldwide

I have chosen to write about cancer for the final blogging challenge because my grandpa has died from it.

there are many types of cancer affecting orangs.Our bodies are made up of trillions of cells each performing an important function like lung cells helping us breathe and muscle cells helping us move our arms and legs.


there are lots of types of cancer like bone cancer, brain cancer, breast cancer, childhood cancer, Gastrointestinal cancer, Bowel cancer and lots more that are killing lots of us every day. in 2009 the risk of developing bowel cancer before the age of 85 was 1 in 12.


protect your self from the sun this summer with 5 ways slip, slop, slap, seek and slide and have fun out side. if you have cancer you can call the cancer council to be safe.









My Story

One day there was a snail called bob bob was as fast as a f1. Every on like bob but his friend did not because bob was so fast. Bobs friend went on a long walk in the Forest then he found a blue thing he Walk in the path of the blue thing and found a old house he went to go see what it was he walk in Side the house to see what it was there was 1 pot in the middle of the room he said what’s this and he look at it and look at it but he didn’t no what it was then he turn around and the was a old woman looking at him and she said it was a pot. She said you can have on wish a he said ok the old women said what will you wish for and bobs friend said I want to be very fast like my friend she said. Ok and in a blink of a eyes bob friend was as fast as bob yeah! He said and he ran home and said look at me and he was so happy!!!

The end by Lachlan

Student Blogging Challenge Activity 4

Jimmy Bartel Geelong cats football club #3
Jimmy Bartel  round 1
Jimmy Bartel 200 game he has kicked 5 goals there is 45 seconds left in the game then Jimmy bartel come from the wing and takes the mark in side 50 he as to kick this to win the game crows are wining by 5 point.
please finish this story.

Student Activity 4 footprints


Mum you are the best mum in the world you are always giving a helping hand when ever I need you. you all ways help me you always are caring and you are so kind you never put people down your cooking is the best in the world I love you mum so much! you all ways make smile when I an sad I love you.


your the best dad in the world you always help me when I an stuck. your strong you always kick the footy with me and help me get better at footy you are good at making me happy when I an sad and you are very funny in lost of ways and you make funny faces at me and tell funny stories when you were younger you always help me in my homework if I am stuck I love you so much dad!


From Lachlan

















5 Thing About Me

1. I like lots of sport my favourite sport is AFL football.

2. I am 10 years old I was born on the 21th on November

3. I have 5 people in my family.

4. my favourite team in the AFL is port power and Geelong.

5. my favourite thing to do is play footy with my friends at school.

Religion:Feathers Fools

If you could change one thing in the story what would it be?

No fighting or conflict.

How would that change alter the ending of the story?

All the peacocks and swans wouldn’t have made conflict.

Re-write the story with the change and new ending.

one day in the nice blue lake there was swans and peacocks one day  a peacock was shouting at the other peacocks calling the swans names and raising his voice so the swans would hear him and the swans were scared and start sharping there fathers and so were the peacocks the next day a swan was flying over the peacock with a twig and the peacock got there arrows and shout the swan then all the swans and peacock went away and to eggs where still there and they hatch and one was a peacock and one was a swan and the said nice things about each other and be came friends.






































Netball carnival

On Tuesday the 1st  of July I went to the netball carnival we left at 8.20am and got there about 9.15an. when we got to netball carnival we got out of the bus then we walk in the thunder birds home ground we put our bags down and went to the first game I was GS I got 1 goal and nick got 3 nick was GA the score was 1-4 we won the next game I was a sub we also won that one as well the score was 2-4 in the second game. the third game I was WA that game the game was ease it was 6-2 then we had a break I got nerds and a drink then back in to the games the forth game I was GD in that game we won it was 2-4 the next game we lost it was 4-5 I was GD he has hard to stay on the last game we won we won it was  5-2 the we pack up a got back on the bus to get back to school we got there at 3.10 we got out the bus and walk on the oval then I went home it was very fun at the netball carnival.DSC01220

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